Sunday, June 14, 2020
The trickiest SAT/ACT transition questions
When transition questions are discussed in regard to SAT Writing/ACT English, they tend to be covered in two main forms.à The firstà way involves a transition placed after a comma in the middle of a sentence.à Version #1:à The Spanish conquest of the Aztecs in 1519 brought the fragrant vanilla flowerââ¬âand its companion, cacaoââ¬âto Europe.à Vanilla was cultivated in botanical gardens in France and England,à butà growers were unable to collect its gloriousà seeds. à Here, the transitionà but is placed halfway through aà sentence and used to connect the two halves of that sentence.à The second way involves transitions between sentences (or occasionally two parts of a sentence separated by a semicolon). Version #2: The Spanish conquest of the Aztecs in 1519 brought the fragrant vanilla flowerââ¬âand its companion, cacaoââ¬âto Europe. Vanilla was cultivated in botanical gardens in France and England. However,à (or: England; however,)à growers were unable to collect its glorious seeds. In the sentence above, the transition however is used at the beginning of a sentence toà indicate the contrasting relationship between that sentence and the previous sentence.à So farà pretty straightforward, right?à There is, however,à another way in which the second version of theà sentence can be written.à Version #3:à The Spanish conquest of the Aztecs in 1519 brought the fragrant vanilla flowerââ¬âand its companion, cacaoââ¬âto Europe. Vanilla was cultivated in botanical gardens in France and England. Growers were unable, however,à to collect its glorious seeds. Although this version of theà sentence places the transition halfway through the last sentence, it is actuallyà identical in meaning toà version #2. Theà transition has simply been moved from the beginning of the sentence to the middle. Its purpose is stillà to convey the relationship between the last sentence and the previous sentence; it doesà notà connect the two halves of the sentence in which it appears. Whenà manyà test-takers see this type of question, however,à they do not realize that they need to look back at the previous sentence to determine the relationship. As a result, they either plug in each answer choiceà into the sentence and then become confused when they areà unable to determine the answer or, worse, sit and stare at the question.à So how do you tell when an underlined transition in the middle of a sentence is being used to connect two halves of a sentence, or to connect one sentence to the previous sentence?à Theà shortcut is to look at the commas around the transition.à Transitions that come after aà single comma are connecting two halves of a sentence.à In contrast, transitions that are surround byà two commas one before, one after are connecting a sentence to the previous sentence.à And ifà youd like the technical explanation, here goes: Transitions that follow a comma onlyà are calledà coordinating conjunctions, also known asà FANBOYS conjunctions (For, And, Nor, But, Or, Yet, So). These conjunctions serve to join twoà independent clauses (complete sentences) into a compound sentence, as in version #1 above. In formal English, these conjunctions should not be used to begin a sentence that is, they should not follow a period or semicolon. Transitions used to begin sentencesà are known asà conjunctive adverbs. Common examples includeà however,à therefore,à furthermore, indeed,à andà similarly. The purpose of these transitions is to indicate the relationship between one sentence and the previous sentence. Usually, these transitions appear at the beginning of a sentence or clause that is, after a period or semicolon.à Sometimes, however, writers move them to the middle of a sentence for the sake of stylistic variety, as in version #3.à In suchà cases, these transitions areà usedà non-essentially that is, they are placed in between two commas. To reiterate: only the placement of the transition changes, not the purpose. To determine whether the transition is correct, you must look back at theà previous sentence and determine its relationship (continue, contrast, cause-and-effect) with the sentence in which the underlined transition appears.à Now lets look at a test-style example: Despite their iconic look and their important role in Dutch history, wooden clogs are now mostly made for touristsà rather than forà everyday wear. The 300,000 pair of shoes made every yearà are, however, soldà mostly to foreign buyers. A)à NO CHANGE B)à ironicallyà C)à inà factà D)à meanwhile The fact that the underlined transition is surrounded by commas indicates that it is necessary to look at the previous sentence to determine the relationship.à What does the previous sentence tell us? That clogs are mostly made for tourists.à What does the sentence in which the transition appears indicates? That most of the clogs made each year are sold to foreign buyers (i.e. tourists).à Are those similar ideas or different ideas? Similar.à So the correct transition must convey a similar relationship. The only option that fits is C),à in fact, because that phrase is used to emphasize a preceding statement.
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